Conflict of Honors – Chapter 28

Shipyear 65
Tripday 155
Third Shift
12.00 hours

In which Gordy becomes a tree.

A little domestic interlude before the crew meeting, which is no doubt going to have Consequences.

I like the part where Lina is watching Priscilla at work. It adds to the ongoing thing of Priscilla’s friends learning about her, and it’s also a nice example of the technique of having a character compare an unfamiliar thing with a thing that’s familiar to the character but not so much to the reader, and thereby show the reader more about both things.

1 thought on “Conflict of Honors – Chapter 28

  1. Ed8r

    It wasn’t until a bit later, this second time through, that I suddenly saw the significant connection between Rusty’s accomplishment and what they accomplish together somewhat later.

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