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Crystal Soldier – Chapter 13

Outbound, Faldaiza Nearspace
Approaching Transition

In which it is not better to be locked out of the pilot’s tower than to be locked in.

Another short chapter.

We get a glimpse of Cantra’s childhood as she’s waking up, in a reasonably natural and unforced bit of exposition. Followed by that classic of unnatural exposition, The Character Looks At Her Reflection So The Reader Can Find Out What She Looks Like.

There’s an interesting bit near the end of the chapter. Apparently this is the first time Jela’s slept apart from the tree since they joined forces. The tree doesn’t appear to be at all bothered by the separation, though.