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Saltation – Chapter 3

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Erkes Dormitory
Suite 302
Anlingdin Piloting Academy

In which Theo gets to know her roommates better.

Asu is the scion of a family that owns a fleet of trading ships — famously and prosperously, to judge by her sense of entitlement, her expectation that Theo would recognise her name (and the fact that Chelly does), and her discourse last chapter on the risks of people always trying to find out what one’s family is doing. (I infer that her homeworld’s media have an attitude towards the lives of the famous more like, say, Feinick than like, say, Liad, though without Feinick’s transactional approach.)

Chelly, despite his poor showing earlier, remains impressively reasonable in the face of a mix of deliberate and inadvertant provocation from Asu and Theo. I wonder if his not-exactly-apologetic comment about Wilsmyth being not at his best when he’s not working is also a description of himself.

Saltation – Chapter 2

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New Student Orientation
Ozler Auditorium
Anlingdin Piloting Academy

In which Theo meets her roommates.

Although Theo noticed last chapter that things here are more freewheeling and less closely monitored than was the case on either of the planets she’s previously left footprints on, the wider ramifications haven’t all sunk in. She remarks to herself that the way Asu acts you’d think her home planet didn’t have a Safety Office — but she clearly means it as a joke, and it doesn’t seem to have occurred to her that it’s very likely true.

Asu says her age is “Eighteen Standards, and a half”, and Theo repeats the “and a half” before conceding that Asu is older than her. I’m not sure whether that means that it’s the half year that makes the difference in their ages or just Theo quietly pinging the unusual degree of precision. It would make sense in general that two people starting school together would be within a year of each other in age, but I’m not sure if that applies to a piloting academy; presumably pilots arrive at whatever age they’re ready. Still, I’d like to think it’s that, if only because that would mean we have an idea of Theo’s age in Standard Years and not just in the still-undefined Delgadan years.

I don’t think I like the detail from the orientation speech about the planetary government requiring them to graduate a minimum number of pilots per year. There are so many ways a requirement like that could go wrong.

After spending so much time on Delgado, I find myself wondering whether Ozler and Erkes were men or women. Which is the unmarked case on Eylot?