Carpe Diem – Chapter 16

Vandar
Springbreeze Farm

In which Val Con shows Miri the Rainbow.

This the first we’ve heard of Clonak ter’Meulen in a while — indeed, since before Val Con’s father left to pursue his Balance, and that was a very long time ago. It won’t be nearly so long until we hear of him again.

Val Con’s thought implies that he hasn’t been into his own mental safe-space at the end of the Rainbow in a long time, perhaps since he fell into the hands of the Department; it seems like the the kind of thing the Department would want to keep a person from having access to. When he tried to run the Rainbow in Agent of Change, he got diverted into one of the programs the Department bolted onto his brain before he got to the point where the stairway and the door appear.

I mentioned, back when Justin Hostro was showing off his wealth by having a Belansium planetscape, that I’d never before managed to make the connection between that and the Belansium planetscapes in “Phoenix”. I’d also never managed to make the connection between either of those and Miri here discovering that her mental safe-space includes a Belansium. (And consequently, I’d never quite understood why she was worried, which is presumably that she knows she lacks the means to have acquired a Belansium legally.) I’m pretty bad at names generally, unless they’re repeated several times in a context which says to pay attention to them, so it’s totally normal for me to have forgotten a name that was mentioned in passing many chapters ago even if I’m reading a series all at once. Or perhaps especially if I’m reading a series all at once, when each new name is quickly followed by others demanding attention. I’m doing a lot better at connecting names during this re-read partly because I’m spacing the chapters out (which gives each set of names a chance to settle into memory before the next lot arrive), partly because I’m specifically looking for connections, and perhaps mostly because I’m taking extensive notes.

3 thoughts on “Carpe Diem – Chapter 16

  1. Ed8r

    I’m gonna guess it’s the extensive notes (which allow recall to be easily checked) more than anything else. I have been reading all the novels and short stories since last November, and although I’ve enjoyed almost all (here’s looking at *you* “Necessary Evils”) I have retained very few names and missed many connections that I’ve enjoyed reading about here, in your blog. Thanks for keeping it up and keeping it going!

  2. Ed8r

    Because of your comments on this chapter, I paid more attention during my second time through, so when I came back to it…whaddaya know—I remembered!

    While Miri’s struggles with learning a new language provide Val Con (and the authors) an opportunity to introduce the rainbow technique, yet they seem somewhat inconsistent with what we discover in Plan B about her attempt to learn Trade, in that she must have learned that language through hearing it from her team/?

  3. Paul A. Post author

    Miri says in the chapter before this that Liz taught her Trade, and that it required considerable effort. Presumably she had no more luck learning Trade from having people around her speak it than she’s having learing Benish from having people around her speak it.

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