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Prodigal Son

In which Scout Commander yos’Phelium returns to the scene of the crime.

I haven’t read this story since a while before the first time I read Ghost Ship, and there’s quite a bit more to it than I remembered. I remembered the mirrored scenes with Miri at the beginning and end, and I remembered everything that happened at the Explorers Club, but the entire middle section I’d completely forgotten about. It’s a much better story with the middle in.

(I recognised the bits with Nelirikk that were included in Ghost Ship, of course, because I’ve just finished reading that, but I remember thinking both times I read Ghost Ship that those must have been new additions to the course of events.)

Speaking of the mirrored sections at the beginning and end, I noticed on this re-read that the opening scene is also reflected in the middle, with Hakan and Kem taking the places of Val Con and Miri, and the place of the rocking chair being taken by a different rocking chair.

Ghost Ship – Chapter 43

Jelaza Kazone
Surebleak

In which everything is going well…

Nearly the end of the book, so time to check in on everyone.

Things are going well for Val Con and Miri, with several items of unfinished business satisfactorily resolved.

And for Theo and Bechimo and Win Ton, though it’s soon yet to be sure exactly where things are going.

And for Daav – well, that’s the question, isn’t it? But even the first time I read this, I was confident we’d be getting an answer, and that it wouldn’t be the answer Daav was anticipating when last we saw him.

Ghost Ship – Chapter 39

Jelaza Kazone
Surebleak

In which there is good news and bad news.

Win Ton also knows who Clarence was, which is perhaps not surprising, since Win Ton is a Scout and the Scouts might be expected to have known who was doing what in their home port. What might be surprising is that, knowing who Clarence was, he’s so quick to trust him; part of that is probably that Theo trusts him, but it might also speak to a detailed knowledge of Clarence’s past: merely knowing Clarence’s old job description would probably be a count against him, but there have been better people and worse people to hold that job, and someone familiar with Clarence’s track record would know which side of the scale he was on.

Meanwhile, back on Surebleak, that quiet haven Theo was thinking fondly of while her crew were trying not to get blown up, Val Con has a metaphorical bombshell of his own to deal with…

Plan B – Chapter 4

Lytaxin
Approaching Erob

In which Miri Tayzin Robertson meets her family.

I suspect Val Con of conscious irony when he says that Korval has never ruled the world, considering how many people over the centuries have glossed Delm Korval as King of Liad. There’s definitely irony, though unconscious on Miri’s part (but conscious on the part of the authors) in Miri’s reassurance to herself that she’s never going back to Surebleak.

Val Con’s address to the child of Jela’s hope is an example of a literary convention that makes linguists and historians wail and gnash their teeth: the use of “thee” and “thy” to indicate archaic formality. The problem is that “thee” and “thy” are actually archaic informality; to the extent that English has ever had something resembling Liad’s distinction between High Tongue and Low Tongue, “thee” and “thy” were Low Tongue, used when speaking with close friends and family — or, depending on context, to address social inferiors. Not the most appropriate of modes for the most junior servant to use in addressing the utmost authority!

I’m willing to buy that the guest apartment Val Con and Miri are staying in is bigger than Zhena Trelu’s house, but I think the bit about the bathroom the size of Lytaxin spaceport is probably an exaggeration.

Val Con’s recitation of his relatives has two or three notable omissions. Two are easily explained: Shan’s lifemating and Anthora’s children post-date Val Con being taken by the Department, so of course he doesn’t know about them. That explanation doesn’t cover the complete lack of any mention of Line bel’Tarda, but that may be covered by the disclaimer that he’s only touching on the minimum necessary to survive the evening’s social event; perhaps Val Con figured that the odds of anyone of Erob mentioning bel’Tarda at the dinner were low enough that they could safely be left, along with the attendant explanations, for another time.

I wonder what it portends that Emrith Tiazan is Delm Erob but Bendara Tiazan is Thodelm Tiazan. Perhaps just that Erob and Tiazan, unlike Korval and yos’Phelium in their present state, are large enough that one person cannot do both jobs well.

Carpe Diem – Chapter 71

Vandar
Kosmorn Gore

In which Cory and Miri say goodbye.

To have been able to leave their hero money behind for Hakan and Kem, Miri and Val Con must have been carrying it with them when Agent sig’Alda showed up. Which is not, on reflection, so surprising: we know already that pilots have a habit of carrying essentials with them at all times, which mercenaries probably share, and having made the decision to signal the mysterious aircraft it would have made particular sense for Val Con and Miri to start carrying anything they didn’t want to leave behind, in case they had to leave in a hurry once the pilot of the aircraft replied. It does seem like a lot of money to have been carrying around, but Val Con and Miri seem like they’d have known how to keep it hidden, and how to protect themselves from anyone who might have been of a mind to take it.

The novel ends on an oddly disquieting note, with Hakan and Kem faced with the fact that they’ve been part of something they can’t understand. They’re going to have a tricky time explaining where Cory and Meri went to everybody else. For that matter, even with the things they know that they can say only to each other, they’re going to have a hard time explaining it to themselves.


Tomorrow: “Quiet Knives”

Carpe Diem – Chapter 69

Vandar
Winterfair

In which Hakan sees a thing that he cannot have seen.

The first published description of an autodoc in action, and one of the more detailed explanations of what it is an autodoc actually does.

The autodoc’s analysis indicates that Miri caught a bit of the MemStim that felled sig’Alda, which presumably explains why she’s been reliving Klamath all the way to the ship. (Not that it needs a memory drug for a gravely injured person to be reliving a past trauma, but it might otherwise have been a bit of coincidence that she was reliving precisely that one.)

It probably says something about sig’Alda that he didn’t bother to hide the footprint trail from his ship. Even given an out-of-the-way location, it might have been better tradecraft to make it less easy for someone to stumble across if they happened to be passing. I have a nasty suspicion that he didn’t bother because he figured any local who found the ship would be done in by the security system, and as far as he was concerned that was a satisfactory state of affairs.

Carpe Diem – Chapter 59

Vandar
Winterfair

In which the Snow Wind Trio makes its radio debut.

The performance of “Leaf Dance” is another of my favourite moments from the novel. I tend to assume that any attempt to put the Liaden Universe on the screen would inevitably disappoint, but that’s one scene that would be amazing if someone got it right.

Carpe Diem – Chapter 55

Vandar
Winterfair

In which there is an opening for a trio.

Speaking of language lessons, Miri’s a lot more fluent in Benish these days too. It’s an interesting detail that she’s started using Benish figures of speech even when she’s talking to herself in Terran.

I don’t know that it tells us anything new, but as a bit of incluing I admire Miri’s statement that once it starts snowing the place will be just like Surebleak except with happy people.

Carpe Diem – Chapter 54

Vandar
Winterfair

In which the first day of Winterfair passes.

Seems Val Con’s taken Miri up on her promise to learn Low Liaden. (And he’s teaching her bows, too; she recognised the bow he gave the king during the medal ceremony.) Well, she did say she has a lot more free time now the king’s men have taken over repair and upkeep of the farm.

And that brings to mind something else I didn’t pick up on in that chapter: the king says something about having arranged for repairs to the farm because of the rebels having done extensive damage, but Miri made it sound like they repaired everything, including the general dilapidation that she and Val Con had been working on. And it doesn’t seem like the rebels would have had time to do a great deal of damage when they were concentrating on dealing with Miri. So was the state of the farm mostly just the state it had already been in before the rebels showed up? And if so, did someone genuinely think the rebels had caused it because they didn’t realise? Or does the king know what the score is, and is using the rebels as an excuse to help out?

Carpe Diem – Chapter 51

Vandar
Winterfair

In which Cory and Meri and Hakan are Heroes of the Realm.

I wonder if the king’s doing Zhena Trelu as much of a favour as he’s presumably trying for; she mentioned a while back that she was thinking of selling the farm and moving into town once it had been fixed up enough to be marketable, and now she’s pretty much stuck with it. With free upkeep and a guaranteed income, admittedly, which makes it less of a burden, and maybe a few months with Val Con and Miri around have added enough good new memories to the place that she’d have reconsidered anyway. Whatever she might think of the arrangement, she clearly knows that there’s no point arguing about it once it’s been publicly announced.

And then Val Con gives the king the bow between equals, which is interesting. Presumably the Benish don’t know precisely what it signifies, but from the zhena’s reaction it still reads to them as being not as respectful as they’d expect. Or is the zhena’s reaction because Miri, following Val Con’s lead, bows instead of curtseying?

I like the bit about the quarterweight of hontoles; it gives the investiture of the Heroes of the Realm a feeling of being a tradition that’s been around for a while. I wonder if a quarterweight of hontoles is worth more these days, or less, than when the first Hero of the Realm was invested.

The king is another of this series’ minor characters who makes a brief but impressively deep impression. I always feel like there’s more going on with him than we ever get to see.